http://sinka.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sinka.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] merlin_holidays 2010-12-22 09:17 pm (UTC)

I'm really loving this story so far!! but I have a little question... are you sure there isn't any chung or part missing between 1st and 2nd part?

Because there is a two weeks gap just at the beginning (we never get to see Merlin and Arthur's first encounter and how Merlin ends up dinning there every day). At first I thought it was just a time jump, but then when Merlin goes to his date with Gwain, he looks at Arthur worried he will "sack him again". Since we haven't seen Arthur sack Merlin the first time, I can only guess we are missing something...

Sorry if I seem rude or something, it's not my intention. I just really really like this story and setting I want to make sure it isn't incomplete.


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