And I really appreciate Morgana making Arthur look like a porn star. Trying to make him extra appealing for Merlin? :D Also, yum, Arthur’s thighs and arse, mmm.
He didn't even get time to process the fact that all his dreams were coming true but did it really have to be this Father Christmas? What was wrong with the traditional Father Christmas who was old and jolly and hadn't been in and around Arthur's nether regions?
I love that moment and how it’s Arthur’s dream come true, except not, except it really is. :DDD
Also, um. The porn during the ceremony. Holy fucking guh.
His hair had gone completely wonky, his cheeks were riding a high flush and his lips, hell, they looked exactly like they did wrapped around Arthur's cock, swollen, red and begging for it. Unfff, oh, Merlin, I love the image you paint of him here. <333
By the time Merlin's mouth had reached the band of Arthur's stockings, Arthur's tunic was gone; his nipples were bitten and so fucking sore; Merlin had lost one strap of his braces and Arthur could see the tip of his cock peeking out from those stupid, sexy velvet pants.
And, OK, this is just so hot. I can just see it in my mind’s eye.
… And then I started copy pasting more particularly hot lines, except I realised I was copying more than half of the porn scene, so, heh. Just, I love your descriptions. *_* Seriously. Pretty much every line is hitting my buttons in a way that makes me wonder if you’ve secretly peeked into my mind because I’m not sure how else you’ve pulled this off (… heh) but you did. And I love how it’s – not entirely perfect, how it’s silly, and sometimes uncomfortable and that’s exactly what really does make it perfect, if that makes sense. And I love, love, love the way they both just want so badly, how they’re absolutely loving it and kind of shameless and guuuh. And, yeah. Um. I should perhaps say that I do particularly love the detail of Merlin’s huge cock (which was both hilarious and ridiculously hot) and the whole thing looking like a cheap porno to Arthur’s mind (also hilarious and hot :D).
And, oh my goodness, the entire penguin petting date! Ahaha. It’s a short scene, but I love every word of it. <333
As for the ending, I love how the whole world peace thing ties into the show canon/legend of Arthur uniting Albion and bringing peace.
In fact, I love all the parallels with the show – how in some ways, they’re the same, with Merlin being the extraordinary magical being and Arthur not, and Merlin being the idealist while Arthur’s more about the hands on approach to uniting everyone, and Merlin initially not telling Arthur about who he is (I only really picked up on that last thing on the second read, but I love that you drew that parallel); and in other ways, their positions are reversed, with Merlin being the important public figure, the leader, but needing Arthur – I love the detail of Arthur being the only one to react to Merlin’s magic like he does, like he was really made for Merlin – and in a way, inspiring Merlin with the whole world peace thing (not that Merlin wasn’t already trying on his own). I love that it ends with them both bringing it about together – like it doesn’t matter who’s in what position, as long as they are together, they can achieve their destiny.
So, yeah, I basically loved this to itty bitty pieces and cannot thank you enough for writing this, anon. That was hands down the best holiday gift I received. ♥”
… And now that reveals are over, I will add, wow, you wrote this as a pinch hit? That is seriously amazing. I can’t believe you wrote all that when you were filling in for someone else! I don’t know what else to say, but thank you so much! <3
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He didn't even get time to process the fact that all his dreams were coming true but did it really have to be this Father Christmas? What was wrong with the traditional Father Christmas who was old and jolly and hadn't been in and around Arthur's nether regions?
I love that moment and how it’s Arthur’s dream come true, except not, except it really is. :DDD
Also, um. The porn during the ceremony. Holy fucking guh.
His hair had gone completely wonky, his cheeks were riding a high flush and his lips, hell, they looked exactly like they did wrapped around Arthur's cock, swollen, red and begging for it. Unfff, oh, Merlin, I love the image you paint of him here. <333
By the time Merlin's mouth had reached the band of Arthur's stockings, Arthur's tunic was gone; his nipples were bitten and so fucking sore; Merlin had lost one strap of his braces and Arthur could see the tip of his cock peeking out from those stupid, sexy velvet pants.
And, OK, this is just so hot. I can just see it in my mind’s eye.
… And then I started copy pasting more particularly hot lines, except I realised I was copying more than half of the porn scene, so, heh. Just, I love your descriptions. *_* Seriously. Pretty much every line is hitting my buttons in a way that makes me wonder if you’ve secretly peeked into my mind because I’m not sure how else you’ve pulled this off (… heh) but you did. And I love how it’s – not entirely perfect, how it’s silly, and sometimes uncomfortable and that’s exactly what really does make it perfect, if that makes sense. And I love, love, love the way they both just want so badly, how they’re absolutely loving it and kind of shameless and guuuh. And, yeah. Um. I should perhaps say that I do particularly love the detail of Merlin’s huge cock (which was both hilarious and ridiculously hot) and the whole thing looking like a cheap porno to Arthur’s mind (also hilarious and hot :D).
And, oh my goodness, the entire penguin petting date! Ahaha. It’s a short scene, but I love every word of it. <333
As for the ending, I love how the whole world peace thing ties into the show canon/legend of Arthur uniting Albion and bringing peace.
In fact, I love all the parallels with the show – how in some ways, they’re the same, with Merlin being the extraordinary magical being and Arthur not, and Merlin being the idealist while Arthur’s more about the hands on approach to uniting everyone, and Merlin initially not telling Arthur about who he is (I only really picked up on that last thing on the second read, but I love that you drew that parallel); and in other ways, their positions are reversed, with Merlin being the important public figure, the leader, but needing Arthur – I love the detail of Arthur being the only one to react to Merlin’s magic like he does, like he was really made for Merlin – and in a way, inspiring Merlin with the whole world peace thing (not that Merlin wasn’t already trying on his own). I love that it ends with them both bringing it about together – like it doesn’t matter who’s in what position, as long as they are together, they can achieve their destiny.
So, yeah, I basically loved this to itty bitty pieces and cannot thank you enough for writing this, anon. That was hands down the best holiday gift I received. ♥”
… And now that reveals are over, I will add, wow, you wrote this as a pinch hit? That is seriously amazing. I can’t believe you wrote all that when you were filling in for someone else! I don’t know what else to say, but thank you so much! <3