Wow, this is just gorgeous! I love how hard they had to work to make their marriage a real thing, how they finally fell in love with each other. Then their parting was so painful, their reunion even worse. However, I think you did a beautiful job of portraying the aftermath of an injury like Merlin's in so few words. It's not an easy thing to do. I loved the ending, “You want to throw the vase to express your anger at your own stupidity?” So them :D
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Date: 2011-12-29 06:28 pm (UTC)